Danger!!!

One day I woke up to a delightful morning when the sun was rising brightly.I got up and dressed then I had breakfast when I heard a faint knock on the window,when I went through to the lounge I saw a lady with a hat and sunglasses on.I went outside and said”excuse me… who are you?”the lady replied “Your best friend of course!”we went to my sisters house and went inside. “hello!!!”we shouted but there was no reply,we went upstairs and all we could find was her phone.Somebody rushed down stairs…then suddenly it went dark…before we could switch the lights on the person had vanished!

2 thoughts on “Danger!!!

  1. Kendall, reading your blog reminds me of a dream. The setting for your story is a normal place, but things seem slightly strange…

    I really like your opening sentence where you describe, in great detail, the ‘delightful morning’. Then in the last sentence, ‘rushed’, ‘suddenly’, and ‘vanished’ create a vivid image in my mind!

    Something we haven’t spoken about in class yet is adding a [space] after punctuation, like commas and full stops.

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