Life is like a box of chocolates
You never know what your gonna get
But what I got was nearly a threat
A vision of drowning and drowning we are
And a vision of bullets that are shot very far
Iām hit in the chest
I can hear a bell ring
The pain goes away I feel like the king
And as they are fighting they hear the birds sing
A bomb is now dropping its dropping on us
It was gigantic and just like a bus
I ran far away and I was not hurt but
when the bomb landed I was nearly burnt
By Logan
I think it rymse alot and it is funny
*i like your poem because it is fun to read and it makes me laugh i could read it over and over again.
*don’t stop making poems.
*keep up the good work.
Really good:)
well done:)
keep up the good work:)
great poem really good description
Brilliant detail and amazing writing š
I really like how you copied bit from forrest gump and it is very descriptive and it is very good