Telling a story!

This term Primary One have been working really hard to improve their writing. We have been learning to tell a story by drawing a picture and adding lots of detail to it.

Below you will see a selection of our work throughout the term.

We regularly use playdoh to hold a “playdoh disco” to work our fine motor skills! This means we pinch, roll and work the playdoh until our fingers are so tired! Some of use have used it to make pictures to illustrate our stories!

Over the last few weeks the Friendly Dragon challenged us to re-tell a story. He was so impressed with our work!

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Daniel – I put lots of detail in – September 2015
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Maya – My fairytale was magical  – September 2015
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Sammy R – I remembered the story and drew it – September 2015
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Jessica – I like doing writing because it is fun – September 2015

 

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Luca – I made a dragon from playdoh, he is very friendly – September 2015
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Yocheved – My dragon is yellow, I was a bit scared of him at first – September 2015
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Aman – I drew the pictures so you would know what was going on in the story – October 2015
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Luca – I had a go at the writing – October 2015
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Miriam – I copied the writing carefully – October 2015