On the 4th of may we did writing on what our ‘Dream Holiday’ would be like. We had lots of different ideas – we had Shelly land, Imaginary land, The ultimate tree house, the first room of Willy Wonka’s Chocolate Factory, Asgard, Hawaii and Gumbo Jumbo land. These are just some of the place are stories where set. We have been developing our personal writing and trying to include a good-quality vocabulary, sophisticated connectives and openers, and a range of accurate punctuation. These are three of the the stories that we created.

Above is Ben McGregor’s story. he did it on Imaginary land.

This is Wanessa’s story, set in the magical ‘Shelly land’.

And above is Kieron’s story visiting the ultimate tree house.

Every one had a great time writing their stories.

by Ben McGregor